Stop the Feeling

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konijntje
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Stop the Feeling

Post: # 2144Post konijntje
Thu Jan 12, 2006 4:32 pm

Up
Dark
lost Dreams - Dreamless Night
Sharp
she Feels Hot water on Her back
her palms and Red cheek against Cold glass
Presence - Angels sing
a Warm breath
Breathes....still

Cold dim Light
loud music plays - Hard
she begins to feel
biting her Finger stops the surge
Head back
a Warm breath against Her neck
Nothing there
Presence - deeper
she Bites her lip
No feeling


For all that I am....I am not.
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Noia
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Post: # 2301Post Noia
Fri Jan 13, 2006 5:41 am

to slip and stumble is never fun
ripped away by the rivers flow
disappear in the setting sun
tossed by the current, to and throw.

the cold water constricts your breathing
the roar assaults your sences
the numbness dulls your hearing
your grip on reality flinches

moments turn to eternities
as a life time is seen in a moment
your body begines to freeze
enveloped in the raging torrent

as a limp ragdoll, one flows
unable to will ones limbs
following the current where ever it goes
a few last thoughts as the light dims

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